It must have been so obvious.. But I had tried…I had tried to hide my smile behind a straight face. I had tried not to get all excited about seeing you again. Could I have learnt to make my eyes not sparkle, to not blush, when I thought of you? Stop that grin from letting away my secret? How could I not love to eat what you liked, be it the zinger or the pizza or the seafood?
I tried. But then it didn’t matter who saw, who knew, who understood and who said what. What mattered was how much you loved my sparkling eyes and how you could make me burst into giggles by copying me, and with those silly little chit chats of yours, and the way you would drive the KFC guy crazy with ordering and cancelling again and again until he got to be our best friend and he too would start smiling as he would see us walking through that door. I just had to wear those glass bangles at all times, hoping maybe that you would drop by if you could escape work even for an hour. I just had to stand by my window so early in the morning, for I knew what time you would drive by, and you would wave and I would laugh and love everything because you made my day, everyday. And I had to just beg my friends to let you come to our little parties at the univ, even though they would make you buy them so much icecream later on, while I scowled at them for wasting your money. And I was delighted at the wonderful surprise party they planned for me, and how they had made you part of the plan and I felt blessed for having such wonderful friends who liked you and such a wonderful you, for being friends with them for my sake. I loved the fact that my mom enjoyed your company and my brothers felt comfortable around you. And that in a true fimly style, you had actually saved my life, for that was when I knew my life mattered so much to you. And I just had to offer the longest of prayers, for at all times, not even once had I forgotten to thank Allah for sending you to me.
I have to thank HIM again. I do, for atleast I had you. I still have you everywhere, from the roads to my college, to the KFC and the KFC guy, the prawns and the pizza, to my decision to study, to the courses I take in my MBA, to the strong support that I now am for my sibblings, I have you.
I cant stop smiling when I think of you. I cant stop that sparkle in my eyes, I cant stop the hope and I know that they all see it. Let them see…I still dont care.Mom wonders why I dont eat KFC anymore. Why fried prawns dont taste as good. My dad cannot understand why I am so keen about my studies. My sibblings love me more than I could have ever imagined. And all I do, is think of you..of what you would have done..what you would have told me to do..I follow what you taught me..I feel, as a shadow.. of you..I love that feeling..I love living ‘you’..
You have been the best teacher in my life. The best friend. The best confidante’. The best love. The best ever, more than I could ever have imagined.
But you know what? I hate the past tense attached with you. It hurts…too much.

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November 26, 2007 at 5:58 am
nocturnal
…….Confidante???
i thought you were straight??
or probably just an E made me think that you werent.
if its really a TYPO then it reflects how essential it is to review the post before posting.
you better delete E from confidante so that ppl could get the true meaning of this post.
Thanks
November 26, 2007 at 11:34 am
Nova
Gosh!!! That was heart-rendering… This post almost made me cry… I cud relate to the last line… so much!
November 26, 2007 at 4:50 pm
Jaded
talk about writing straight from the heart…
good to see your comment on blog after ages…
hope you’re well?
November 26, 2007 at 8:22 pm
Raj
November 27, 2007 at 11:48 pm
UTP
I hate the past tense attached with u…thats a nice way to put it…
November 29, 2007 at 7:09 am
Saadat
November 29, 2007 at 5:03 pm
Falsa
I know.
Makes me sad too.
Love you though, for your honesty and the decision to move on.
Life sometimes gives very little choice, eh?
November 29, 2007 at 11:31 pm
UD
@ nocturnal : chek ur mail :@:@:@
@ nova :
welcome here
@ jaded : yup, iv been well, n away from blogworld…
@ raj : i want eternity… sometimes, some moments make me wish time cud stop
@ utp : ummmm.. i hate it, cant help it!
@ saadat :
*i can smile back*
@ falsa : no darling, life sometimes gives no choice, not even little.. for with little choice, there still is… hope..
November 30, 2007 at 2:42 pm
Omer
Sooner or later ….you will be fine ….
November 30, 2007 at 3:22 pm
PsycheD
the last line said it all. beautiful post – i can sooo identify
thanx for dropping by btw…hope u see u around more often!
December 16, 2007 at 2:09 am
Xill-e-Ilahi
insensitive as i may seem – i am, after all, also known as the iceman – the most worrying thing about the post is the fact that i seemed to get the idea that you had prawns at kfc. trust me, that’s a no-no.
seriously though, when you’re down in the dumps, things can only get better, murphy notwithstanding. hang in there.
December 20, 2007 at 8:15 am
shafee
FANTASTIC!!!! kya emotion… very intense… i was glued to the screen… you will be happy inshallah.
December 20, 2007 at 8:24 pm
Saadat
Eid Mubarak!
June 2, 2008 at 7:50 am
Sara
Wow, your writing is amazing! You are having me at the edge of my seat – what happened? Tell the rest of the story.